Definitely you can do much better in other styles. Your originality is not well expressed in this slow piano-type pop/rn'b music.
I prefered the other one. But man! You are talented! The beginning is disappointing and really makes this song sound different and interesting.
Wow !! This sounds really great ! I'm in love with the transition passages. I'm going to your website right now !
I have the feeling I already heard that. But for a town it suits very well, the rhythm is good. I'm just thinking, it could become annoying if I heard it over and over while I am playing.
It is a bit repetitive, I will admit that for sure. I'll take another look at it and try to add more to make it easier to listen to =)
Thanks for the feedback!
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